To mean It

when you say love,
you don't mean it
like all the times
you were you

when I say hurt
i just mean it
because of I was
tired of seeing
you to be you
tired of being me
when I am not with you

we just don't mean
we just rush
for nothing and it's
Us pretending that
we are in love

I must move on
you must move on
our hearts is dying
to have a break
to see if we mean
To be Us for Us

and it's you
when you are alone
and it's me
when I'm on my own
but what we know
WE never meant for Us

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

This is empowering, emotional, and sad all the same. I like the structure, and the movement from verse to verse.

I love everyone, and I'd tell you that I love you, bit I'm afraid that love osnnot like what you may of had.

I'd love to cheer you up, though. :) great poem

[Sarah King]

thank you my friend for your lovely emotions. Bad days will pass and we'll get all the nice moments we deserve. :)

[Alucard6336]

Hey we're in this together. You have your scars, I have mine, and don't you ever forget we are friends kk. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Words and actions. Both when used with the shadow of lies. Will break our heart one day. Powerful flow of thoughts led to true ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sarah King]

thank you Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[E G TEN]

Hey Sarah, I admire your words respectively strong and independent. Not one of those drama
queens. Very well said and all will be fine. Thanks EG

[Sarah King]

Oh! thank you EG. it's very sweet to hear those words friend. thanks again

[ochechi]

Crazy,
All is nothing
All is vanity,
Life some times not fair
Should we be fair to life
Its just a crazy world
How can we survive being humble
The sun is there to burn our skin
The storm is there to bring damages,
Its all crazy

[Sarah King]

It was so nice thank you.

[ochechi]

You we'll come.

[Firemay]

Thanks for sharing i enjoyed your piece, it was lovely!

[Sarah King]

Thank you dear!

[Gee]

And then on a steed of purest white your Prince will arrive.Some kiss one frog,others many......enjoyed this piece

[Sarah King]

Thank you Gee!

[andrew mitchell]

How the exterior hides the emptiness inside, the hollowness, the pain until you look into their eyes then all is revealed . A nice write Sarah.

[Sarah King]

thank you Sir!

[Neytri]

"Our hearts is dying" - I guess, its an grammatical error. If not, please ignore...
Anyways, it was nice reading it.

[Sarah King]

I wanted to show that the heart can die,too; however, our body is working.. I meant the soul. by the way, thank you dear! :)

[Neytri]

I referred to the word subject verb agreement, it should either have been 'heart is' or 'hearts are' .:)

[Sarah King]

I got the point. thanks honey ;)

[Krizito]

Those are never good_years spent in pretence of happiness and then finally choosing to accept the fact..."WE are never meant for US".
Nice piece of work!

[Sarah King]

Thank you :)

[Gaurav]

Glancing through the windows of perfection, this poem captures the essence of hardly felt emotions. Nice read.

[Sarah King]

Thank you friend! :)