Here I Go!

Here I go!

Here I go!
just like an indecisive wind waiting for a tree
to touch her!
like a dark shadow waiting for a sun
to rise her!
here I go!
ahead of the hills,
just like a rocky rock waiting for a storm
to launch her!
just like a voice waiting for a mouth to shout her!
and here I go babe!
just like a girl waiting for her love to call her!
so, would you call her!?

Reviews

[zunie frost]

wow !!! this is fantastic !!! i love the flow !!!
Here I go!
just like an indecisive wind waiting for a tree
to touch her!
like a dark shadow waiting for a sun
to rise her!
here I go!
these lines are really powerful !!!
101% ratings !!!
friend you are talented !!!! have a nice day

[Sarah King]

thank you so much for your kind comment. :)

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!

[ochechi]

Here I go
Life waiting for me to cherish her
Here I go
Full of understanding n love

[Sarah King]

so happy that you are involved with the poem :)

[armin]

here I go!
ahead of the hills,
just like a rocky rock waiting for a storm
to launch her!

Those lines are masterly written and powerful.

Armin. ...

[Sarah King]

thank you :)

[Inject Positivity]

Such a beautiful one....The choice of words is brilliant...I loved the passion in it...Very beautiful imagery.....Well done Sarah my frnd.....Full rating....Clap! Clap!

[Sarah King]

thank you so much for your nice and supportive comment :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I could see this as a romantic piece crying out for the one she loves, or a person who is expressing their love of nature... either way quite an enjoyable read.

[Sarah King]

thank you Sir :)

[E G TEN]

Hey Sarah, you've said a lot and this little compact piece.
I'm a fan of poems anything about nature, as you have
displayed here, very cool thanks for the add. EG

[Sarah King]

thank you so much EG to want me as a friend, also your kind comment :)