Caged

Anger and emotion locked away inside.

INT. CLASSROOM - MORNING
A girl is sitting quietly alone in her chair, she is quietly reading a book when she looks up and sees her classmates enter the room.  She tries to ignore them and continues to read her book.

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INT. A CAGE IN A DARK ROOM - MORNING
The girl is now shown to be fast asleep inside a cage, and she is just beginning to wake up.  She slowly begins to stand up and pace across the cage.  Her expression is serious as she walks around the cage.

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INT. CLASSROOM - MORNING
Some of her CLASSMATES looks over at the girl momentarily, before going back and laughing with each other. The girl continues to sit quietly at her table, focusing on her book.

CLASSMATE 1 (V.O.)
She’s such a b***h.

CLASSMATE 2 (V.O.)
She thinks everything is about her.

CLASSMATE 3 (V.O.)
She has no sense of humour.

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INT. A CAGE IN A DARK ROOM - MORNING
The girl is angry and rattling against the sides of the cage as the insults echo throughout the room. She is slowly becomes tired, but she still looks angry.

CLASSMATE 1 (V.O.)
She’s fat. She’s ugly.

CLASSMATE 2 (V.O.)
She’s a s**t, she’s a w***e.

CLASSMATE 3 (V.O.)
She’s always angry.

FADE TO BLACK.

Author's Note

Planning to get rid of the editing instructions (right now this is being considered in a competition).

Reviews

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

I like your writing, it's like a play, when i read it, i have a sense to play it, it's great imagination, Thank you Sarah for it. I need your opinion about my short short stories.