More Stars in the Sky

More Stars in the Sky

A Poem by LazerRays

Nobody sees when a star fades 
Because there’s more in the sky 
It doesn’t matter, 
 Because the others still shine
The universe won’t mourn me 
If I say goodbye 
Because there’s always more stars- 
 To shine in the sky

© 2020 LazerRays


Author's Note

LazerRays
The stars have a reason to shine, and I?
I don’t...

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well i doubt that,we all would miss ya

Posted 4 Years Ago


LazerRays

4 Years Ago

Thank you word man :)
 wordman

4 Years Ago

you`re welcome
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Hey, I'll miss you if you went away someday! There maybe other stars but they can't compensate your extensively bright shine.
Moreover we are always together like a cluster of stars, if one fades, we'll shine for them, won't let it fade away.
And your poetry, your creativity and enthusiasm are the reasons you'll shine and that never ends not even after hundred billions of years. You'll still shine like the young charming one!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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LazerRays

4 Years Ago

Thank you for that analogy MC that was very kind. Thanks for your review :)
but there will be one less light...and someone will miss that particular light.
I am sure of it.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


LazerRays

4 Years Ago

Go outside and look at the stars. The next night see if any are gone that you notice. Thank you for .. read more
Each little star counts, each little star is a part of the broader picture. I felt the sadness here and want to give that little star a polish to get her sparkle back.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


LazerRays

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much but it’s easy to get lost up there hidden among the stars. Thanks for the shin.. read more

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Added on March 6, 2020
Last Updated on September 22, 2020
Tags: depression, Suicide, stars, mental health, loneliness, worthlessness, alone, death, thoughts, sky, night

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LazerRays
LazerRays

Spit truth, bleed emotion, fight for love, hold to your morals



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Old username: Sarah_Allen_Poe am a former stimulant addict who has found new life and meaning through psychedelics. I enjoy late night longboarding, cooking, astronomy, DDR, retro video .. more..

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