Messages Through the Moon

You were with the setting sun, 

Far from the stars I view, 

When you dream- I lay awake, 

Sending you messages through the moon, 

While the night kisses your eyelids, 

I'll wish to be there too, 

But it seems the closest we'll ever get, 

Is us both viewing the sky's moon, 

It's so unfair to be this way, 

and I know my thoughts are due, 

But lying in this darkness abyss, 

I'll send you messages through the moon

Reviews

[Karmee]

such a lovely write here, I love the moon and stars

[LazerRays]

Me too :) thanks forstopping by worth that nice review

[AllenS]

Thank God for the moon ... huh! Sometimes keeping the comversation going is what we seek more than anything.

[LazerRays]

True true hahaha! Thank you again Allen, a pleasure to have you here :)

[light and ashes]

This is lovely and sweet, nice job :)

[LazerRays]

Thank you angel! :D

[light and ashes]

You're welcome, I hope you are doing good.

[Tony]

Reminds me of lonewolf howling at the moon.
Very haunting, and passionate.

[LazerRays]

Thanks Tony ;) is your name supposed to be like Tony Hawk or something? Hahaa thank you for the review :D

[Tony]

It's my pleasure. I dig your work.
My name is Tony Makosica, or just Tony Mak for short.

[LazerRays]

Oh hahahaha my apologies! Though he is a fantastic skateboarder ;)

[Chris Shaw]

This is quite a romantic little write Sarah and I enjoyed it. Distance separating the lovebirds. That's how I read this, and the moon played a wonderful part. Nicely conveyed.

Chris

[LazerRays]

Thank you Chris! I'm glad it came across like that. Of only they were a little closer.... Lol. The moon is always a pretty sight....

[Chris Shaw]

Moonlight and romance go hand in hand :) Hope you are OK.

[LazerRays]

Thank you for checking in, as always :) I am fine for now haha. Hope you're doing ok too! It means a lot to me when you ask that, really. Makes me smile. Thank you :D

[Chris Shaw]

Aw, well I'm pleased I do ask. It's good to know you are doing OK. That makes me smile as well. All good with me. Enjoy the rest of your day :)

[LazerRays]

Ah thank you again haha, enjoy yours too

[Rye]

This is so pretty, I enjoy watching the moon and stars. It's fun to try and make images out of them. Very pretty write

[LazerRays]

Thank you again for wonderful review! :D it is fun, isn't it?

[Jade]

This rocks, I love this piece. So well written and creative. Awesome penning here

[LazerRays]

thank you! :D

[Einstein Noodle]

oh i especially like the leave taking as he sets with the sun ... and she rises as the moon ... half way round the world our love can still be true eh!? as good ol' Einstein has shown ... time and distance are relative ;) i so enjoyed your "gooey" words Sarah ... they are gentle on me heart and mind
E.

[LazerRays]

thank you hhahahahah! You are correct, Einstein! :P Thank you for that lovely review! I enjoy seeing you around! :D

[Einstein Noodle]

and i enjoy being here ;) such a fine collection of people ..working hard to be honest and relevant for others ... thats what i especially like about the Cafe' and poetry ... love and peace

[LazerRays]

hahahahah I like the feeling i get from here too- like i finally belong to something...

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ................. me too

[LazerRays]

:D hahahahaha yeah!

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

The moon usually reminds me of a big fat piece of cheese but the way you wrote this piece did make me forget my tumtum for a few moments and think of more humanistic things and I sit back and take another look at it instead of just drooling after it 😛. I dated a Tom once for no other reason than this and it all came back to me. All in the past though, now bring on a cheesecake any time! You’re near perfect here...pen on 🖊😺✒️

[LazerRays]

hahahahahah cheese???? isnt that what mice think of? hmmmmm ;) hahahaha. Though, cheesecake is yummy so think of that all you want. Thanks for the review so much!!!! glad to see you around again!

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

You’re welcome! This poem is a fine read indeed. Recommended for all cats!

Cheeseburgers are great stuff too. I plan to have plenty on my vacation next week. Leave nothing for the mice if I can help it 😛

[Abhishek Izy]

This actually is a very fantastic piece of work. Knowing you of what I do, this is so much in contrast of the real you and yet you picked and mimicked the emotions so well. Words have been placed beautifully and I just love this lines:

"When you dream- I lay awake,
Sending you messages through the moon, "

If you ask me, this is best of your work. Keep it up

[LazerRays]

Well you see, I go by this "if you didn't feel; it isn't real" for poetry. And I have never written a fake poem. So these are real feeling that do contradict my personality. A big surprise, huh? Hahahaha- I don't blame the confusion. I'm typically a confusing person. Thank you for thst wonderful review. I haven't seen you in a while so it's always wonderful to see you around :D have a nice day!