The Thing I Can't Have

The one thing I cannot have,

is have fate to favor me,

In all of my ways and all of my paths,

Karma always seems to betray me,

What hurts the most, 

is this hole in my heart,

bleeding a trail away from where I want to go,

Painting the torture map of my soul,

The one thing I cannot have,

is my happiness

Author's Note

eh. what am I saying?

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think it's always painful to identify what your happiness is but not to have it close by...and still we keep
saying it's better to have loved and then lost than to never love at all :x
'Painting the torture map of my soul' I love that line, very visual too.
What you're saying does make sense to me...

All in all, a relatable write.

[LazerRays]

Ah thank you yumna. And
o.o hahahaha now that I've looked um yeah, "hole"
sometimes autocorrect screws me over XD I'll change that ASAP hahahaha! Thanks for stopping by, my favorite reviewer ;)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

better to have 'whole' for 'hole' than 'thong' for 'thing' hahahahahaha jk :P
You're welcome, my favourite person ;) :D

[LazerRays]

true true. and grrrr youuuuuuuuuu!!! lol. jerk. go away, favorite person :P youve said enough. JKKKKKKKKKKK ;)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I only just got started hahahaha
Nothing's enough ;)

[LazerRays]

no it isnt....

[Onlyme]

This echoes, for all to relate to and understand. We all wish for happiness it's the ultimate thing we all yearn for. In reaching for it. That is the golden ticket to everything. We can but try to be content and cherish the moments of joy we do feel. And hopefully, the rest will follow. Great write Sarah.

[LazerRays]

thank you so much for this review!!! and yes, i agree; we should be content with what we have and not be greedy. thanks for stopping by!

[Onlyme]

my pleasure.