Dance in this storm

Dance in this storm

A Poem by LazerRays
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Dance with me in this rain, The downpour will be the tempo...

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Dance with me in this rain,
Just you and me, 
 The downpour will be the tempo, 
And the thunder, the drums, 
 The lighting shall be paparazzi, 
 You can be the lead singer, 
And I'll hum along, 
Spin me around, 
 While the wind cheers us on, 
Whistling and yelling, 
Spin me in this turmoil, 
Dance with me in this storm

© 2020 LazerRays


Author's Note

LazerRays
If its a revolution without dancing,
Its a revolution not worth having

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(Jeff) Careful, if you dance in a storm you get struck by lightning. if you get struck by lightning it would be funny to watch. Dont worry though, your brain wouldnt be harmed, cus its already fried!

Posted 6 Years Ago


The Immortal  Phoenix

6 Years Ago

(Micky) you know being on this websights starting to change us. The more comments i read the less of.. read more
LazerRays

6 Years Ago

hahaha. i hope so
LazerRays

6 Years Ago

And you can try to tear me apart. I dare you. I'm invincible haha. You won't ever pull me down haha... read more
Very, very nicely written, well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is actually good. I've read like eight thousand "why me darkness and death, people don't understand me like I" blah blah self masturbation and razors poems on this site. Do you like zombie?

Posted 6 Years Ago


LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Hahaha! Well, you won't find razors, masturbation, and no one loves me stuff in my poetry. My poetry.. read more
CLR9

6 Years Ago

I like zombie too.
The drum of my heartbeats is calling for someone special.
I am dancing in the storm.

Hats off to you!

Posted 6 Years Ago


LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Thank you! Hats off to you too!
This review may be biased because I love a great thunderstorm. It truly has a rhythmical touch to it and you capture it perfectly. You're able to tie serene human interactions together with the events of such a thing that could be seen as unpleasant in such a laconic poem. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your review! It means a lot!
Now this made me actually want it to thunder and lightning just to do as you said. It made my heart skip a beat and put a massive smile on my face. Reading this wonderful, light-hearted joyous poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I love a good thunderstorm... Its so majestic and powerful
I love the downpour will be our tempo

Posted 6 Years Ago


LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Thank you roman version of Dionysus! Your so kind!
Dance with me through our storm, the atmosphere of love, minds will retain,
Your poem inspired me to add a bit on. Great poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I liked the viewpoint of this poem-optimism. Inspite of the bad weather, you take it as an opportunity to enjoy with your partner and regard each and every element of ill weather as the instruments of dance. A nice poem indeed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like the lyrical quality here. Really adds to the feel of this write. To me, any relationship is a dance of sorts, you just gotta know how to go along with the beat!
Nice write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on July 9, 2018
Last Updated on January 29, 2020
Tags: Fights, dance, rain, storm, tempo, love

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LazerRays
LazerRays

Spit truth, bleed emotion, fight for love, hold to your morals



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Old username: Sarah_Allen_Poe am a former stimulant addict who has found new life and meaning through psychedelics. I enjoy late night longboarding, cooking, astronomy, DDR, retro video .. more..

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