(Jeff) Careful, if you dance in a storm you get struck by lightning. if you get struck by lightning it would be funny to watch. Dont worry though, your brain wouldnt be harmed, cus its already fried!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
thank you, i know its already fried. haha. it doesnt take a moron to guess it. ;)
but i gues.. read morethank you, i know its already fried. haha. it doesnt take a moron to guess it. ;)
but i guess a moron already tired
6 Years Ago
(Jeff) Ummm. I got nothing
6 Years Ago
(Micky) How dare you, you fried my boyfriends brain.
6 Years Ago
(Micky) You must pay.
6 Years Ago
(Jeff) Micky dont, hes a retard, leave him be
6 Years Ago
she. im a she. hahahah. dont get yourself into stuff you cant control
6 Years Ago
(Micky Oh she has earned himself a poem.
6 Years Ago
(Micky) I know just how to rattle her cage
6 Years Ago
what? hahaha
6 Years Ago
(Jeff) I think she rattled your cage
6 Years Ago
two people? haaha. who is who?
6 Years Ago
(Keven) What are you two a*s hats up two now?
6 Years Ago
(Micky) Nothing Papa *laughs* As if. we were just explaining to doufusburg over here why he shouldnt.. read more(Micky) Nothing Papa *laughs* As if. we were just explaining to doufusburg over here why he shouldnt mess with peaple who are meaner then him
6 Years Ago
(Jeff) this profile is shaired by three peaple, ME,Micky and keven. hopefully keven isint on.
.. read more(Jeff) this profile is shaired by three peaple, ME,Micky and keven. hopefully keven isint on.
6 Years Ago
(Jeff) stupid lag
6 Years Ago
hmm. a very confused person- how sad. wish i could help ;)
6 Years Ago
(Micky) only jeff seems to be confused at the moment
6 Years Ago
i like your poem about me- very cute
6 Years Ago
(Micky) You'er not the only geek here i surprised the guys
6 Years Ago
;) haha. You really like trolling people, huh? hahaha
6 Years Ago
(Micky) I could be more then a troller if I wanted to be. Key word wanted
6 Years Ago
haha. You have a heart of gold. you could have really torn me apart if your tried.
(Micky) you know being on this websights starting to change us. The more comments i read the less of.. read more(Micky) you know being on this websights starting to change us. The more comments i read the less offensive our comments are.I think its humman interaction thats starting to change us
6 Years Ago
hahaha. i hope so
6 Years Ago
And you can try to tear me apart. I dare you. I'm invincible haha. You won't ever pull me down haha... read moreAnd you can try to tear me apart. I dare you. I'm invincible haha. You won't ever pull me down haha. So hit me with your best shot, wannabe
This is actually good. I've read like eight thousand "why me darkness and death, people don't understand me like I" blah blah self masturbation and razors poems on this site. Do you like zombie?
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Hahaha! Well, you won't find razors, masturbation, and no one loves me stuff in my poetry. My poetry.. read moreHahaha! Well, you won't find razors, masturbation, and no one loves me stuff in my poetry. My poetry is me against me. My battle caused by me. Mental disorders. I have bipolar so I resolve it by writing. You mean zombies like the monster? Or something else? Loti.
This review may be biased because I love a great thunderstorm. It truly has a rhythmical touch to it and you capture it perfectly. You're able to tie serene human interactions together with the events of such a thing that could be seen as unpleasant in such a laconic poem. Thank you for sharing!
Now this made me actually want it to thunder and lightning just to do as you said. It made my heart skip a beat and put a massive smile on my face. Reading this wonderful, light-hearted joyous poem.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you! I love a good thunderstorm... Its so majestic and powerful
I liked the viewpoint of this poem-optimism. Inspite of the bad weather, you take it as an opportunity to enjoy with your partner and regard each and every element of ill weather as the instruments of dance. A nice poem indeed!
I like the lyrical quality here. Really adds to the feel of this write. To me, any relationship is a dance of sorts, you just gotta know how to go along with the beat!
Nice write.
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am a former stimulant addict who has found new life and meaning through psychedelics. I enjoy late night longboarding, cooking, astronomy, DDR, retro video .. more..