Dance in this storm

Dance with me in this rain, The downpour will be the tempo...

Dance with me in this rain,

Just you and me, 

 The downpour will be the tempo, 

And the thunder, the drums, 

 The lighting shall be paparazzi, 

 You can be the lead singer, 

And I'll hum along, 

Spin me around, 

 While the wind cheers us on, 

Whistling and yelling, 

Spin me in this turmoil, 

Dance with me in this storm

Author's Note

If its a revolution without dancing,
Its a revolution not worth having

Reviews

[Vivian Gospel]

The tempo jas an element of mania to it. I like it

[LazerRays]

thank you for your review

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

To dance together in the storm would need courage, interest and a lot of coordination of movement. If two can do this, they are for keeps. A very interesting look at relationships.

[LazerRays]

thank you so much for the review Dhara!

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

You are welcome Sarah :)

[Einstein Noodle]

ohh this is a keeper...i feel the unfettered joy of the dance with you in this ..wonderful experience of my imaginings .. well done! i would not change a thing! my younger daughter loved to "play" in the rain ... of course i called her in when the paparazzi arrived ... dad that i am ;}
E.

[LazerRays]

thanks! youre a good dad! gotta watch out for the kiddo

[Einstein Noodle]

;) always ......

[Arriam]

I can see I've already left a review on this from one of my older accounts and my statements still stand- Your imagery is so powerful, romantic, electric, and your personification of that roaring rain really lets you almost close your eyes and feel your words, like that rain, soak into your skin. Long story short, this has remained one of my favorite pieces on this site since my first account.
Arriam

[LazerRays]

The praise might get to my head haha. Thank you for reviewing (again)
Out of curiosity- what was your old account?

[Arriam]

Well, let it get to your head enough so you know for sure it's the truth.
Andrea Greene, of many. It feels odd to return after reviewing this so early on.

[LazerRays]

Hmm- can't say I remember to be honest. But thanks again!

[Arriam]

....which is probably for the best.

[Deep]

wonderful poem! loved reading it. "The downpour will be the tempo,
And the thunder is the drums,
The lighting shall be paparazzi," -- these lines are my favorite. Keep writing.

[LazerRays]

Thank you so much! That meant a lot to me!

[Taniska 😊€..]

I like your poem ,keep writing beautiful poems (smiles) 😊

[LazerRays]

thank you so much for the review :D (Smiles)

[Wyrn Tiger]

This is awesome. you seem like a vary interesting person.

[LazerRays]

why thank you, you must be interesting too XD
we interesting people seem to flock together

[Simone Davis]

I love this piece absolutely beautiful

[LazerRays]

Thank you so much ;)

[LKBillips]

This is pretty cool. I like your weather analogies. Good job!

[LazerRays]

thank you!