Broken.

I'm fragile.

If I fall I break.

If you don't catch me

I shatter.

If you don't piece me

back together

I lay broken.

 

Leave me

like this,

and I won't ever

be restored.

I just

Lay broken

On the cold floor

Wishing for ever more

That you will find me

And glue me back together.

Reviews

[MAC]

the fragile heart damages the mind as well. an excellent write

[Shahan Khan]

Nice use of words,

Like the poem

[revalatia]

If someone left me shattered and broken upon the floor.. i'd kick some a*s lol :P.. I liked this poem :)

[tekphobik]

glass girl

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Sarah,
A good poem with good emotion. Personally I think ending on your penultimate line would have more impact.

[Polaroid Impossible]

Simple yet effective. Anyone who has been in love can relate I am sure. Well done. Keep it up!

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Wonderful poem. I like your wordings which give more meanings. with wishes.

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully heartfelt words.

[MoriartyMesa]

Reminds me of a saying my gram used to say (she was Irish)

Once the bottle is broken the whiskey spills and no one but the ants get to have a nice and jolly time.


works the same for human hearts

[Daniel DelMonacco]

I really like the vulnerability in this. Good job!