Thinking or Feeling

Love or lust?

What’s the difference?

Truth is, I don’t know

Is it thinking?

Or feeling?

Hearing?

Or seeing?

 

What I want?

Or what I need?

What’s a heart if it’s never been broken?

Is it thinking?

Or feeling?

Being?

Or breathing?

 

And I can’t see the meaning

I’m thinking over and over again if i made the right choice

And you think you know my meaning

but how can you if i don’t?

Reviews

[Revery]

Nice write. We all ask this of ourselves and just when we think it's black and white it becomes even more grey.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi again Sarah,
Like the first two verses but it looses something in the flow and direction. It leaves me thinking it seemed to be a good exploration of emotion but never paid off. The opening line is a real draw but it looses direction and I simply feel what was that about?

[Eve]

Hehehehehe. I think that is very poetic. I like the visual impact as well. It is lovely