Sinful

An acrostic poem

Sweet ignorance shan't save you

Into a downward spiral you fall

Now you have been entranced

Follow your lover 'to a world of bliss

Unknowingly you sin

Lust

Reviews

[Revery]

Ahhhh, topics I have writes about, at least a few times. Love it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Now this is good. Powerful and well constructed if a little contrived!

[Stammers]

this is quite a limited form, so considering that; I'm pretty impressed, better than anything I could come up with! You made it sound unforced, good job.

[Kyle]

Nice job! This worked out well.

[Clockwork]

The essential message of this poem reminds me a little bit of the sermon Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God by Jonathan Edwards. Nice job of representing a classic thought in a new form.

[Coyote Poetry]

In so few words. Took reader on trip into desire and passion. Hard to stop the emotion when the passion overcome the mind. No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[One Seeker]

i like it, i guess! i'm not really sure (that's actually why i like it)