Keeping arms

I want your arms around me

 

Keeping me warm

from the ice that is around

from the night closing in

 

Keeping me safe

from the winds that blow around

from the hurt people say

 

I will wrap my arms around you

and never let go

Reviews

[Aravind]

Liked it!

Simple and well written..

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Very Tender and loving Poem :)

[SilentScreaming]

Short and simple, i love it. Great write.

[Sukriti Suki]

Simple, honest and to the point. Brilliant.

[Inyourshadow]

A simple wish and a simple truth for what more could one want than to be held safe against the world and all it may throw up. I love how his arms shield you not only from the elements but also from the hurt, keep em' coming

[EMF]

A wonderfully warm poem taht wraps itself around you and works perfectly. Not a word is unneccesary and they style shows what many in WC could learn a hell of a lot from. Superb.

[SpokenWord]

The feeling of security fosters deep love within it. When we fill safe we can express our self with deep meaning knowing we are accepted, what more could anyone want from being hugged or snuggled next to the one they love dearly.

[Mr. ECHO]

nice. i like it. very inspiring.

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice poem. I like the simple and kind desire of this poem. A beautiful and hopeful poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tasha]

This was beautiful and powerful. You did a fantastic job.
♥ Ta'Shandra