Angels Cry

They cry over the wars of

  Yesterday

    Today

      Tomorrow

 

Their hearts break as they see

 blood staining the ground

  from broken people

 

Fighting over the same thing

 saying 'mine' 'no mine'...

The fight goes on

 till humans death is bound

 

They cry for peace

Happy smiles and friends all around

Author's Note

The picture in of a make-up I did.

Reviews

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

Brilliant construction.

[Teenage Romeo]

yet they do have to come in sometime and stop us humans

[Laura]

This is very sad, but beautiful. You have a lot of talent. =)

[rae52]

sad but true

[Coffee Vampier]

This is dark with such meaning behind it :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

a sad story but true.....
thx for a reality check

[Inyourshadow]

saying 'mine' 'no mine'...
The fight goes on

like children squabbling over sweets, love the depth of this poem, maybe one day all we will read is the last stanza painted on the borders of all the countries of the world proclaiming an end to foolish blood shed. Keep em' coming

I mean no insult but your name attracted my eyes, have you read JDUnderhills works on here as his name and yours so scream Tolkien and he like you is a wonderfully talented poet. ~ Shadow

[Mr. ECHO]

i agree with devil's angel. nice

[Sukriti Suki]

This is very deep and dark. Nice.