Golden Setting

Golden bright

Red rosey light

Everything around

Glowing rosey gold

The Suns last reflection

As Night takes possession

Author's Note

Writen in the second half of 2009

Reviews

[Marshal Gebbie]

Greetings fellow Hobbit, I'm going to post a little prose poem about Taranaki..just for you. "Taranaki Evensong"

[K.C. Zbryk]

When things truly come alive, and when the brain contemplates the difficult questions. I beautifully penned poem, and the last line is truly inspiring.

[Shy Girl]

Short and to the heart of every sunset... beautiful :) I liked it.

[Star Wolf]

Very very beautiful. The sunset no matter where it is can sure be glorious. Your poem captured that perfectly. Awesome!

[EMF]

This is terrific. A spot on summation of a sunset. The only criticism, and this is pedantic in the extreme, it the shape of the poem. As it is, it works nearly right, but if there is a was just to respace the fourth line, just a bit to give a more pyramidic structure it becomes visually drawing before you even begin to read the words.
A trick of the eye. It's an old trick I've used before. Pop a comma in after Golden and you may see what I mean.
Sorry, but it's the only thing that stops the poem being perfect. When read out loud, as I tend to, it sounds perfect.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful short poem. Your words are true. Nothing as beautiful as the nightfall. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote