Thus Wish

2011

Thus we wish

 A song and dance

This we wish

 A soft little glance

Thus we wish

 A kiss and chance

This we wish

 Love be our stance 

Author's Note

Have changed the spelling mistake lol from 'solf' to soft haha oh dear me

Reviews

[EMF]

Terrific. But... there's always a but. To begin with I did wonder what a solf was, but (that's where the but comes in) I don't really care. I like the sound and feel of it. Love doesn't always make sense, so stick with 'solf'. A good word.
I'll steal it later.

[BigDaddySiddle]

i liked this piece! :) good one

[Mr. ECHO]

I LIKE IT. it is very compellin. overall a teriffic read.

[Stephanie Slayer]

fantastic work

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Sarah, These poems the short and yet so powerfully strong are my true favorites. I believe that if you can truly capture something in a few words and make your meaning perfectly clear, that it is just fantastic. And this piece speaks so much in just a few words. I wish I could bottle it and ship it to a friend because it describes my feelings toward him tenfold. Beautiful job Sarah.xo

[carriehiggs]

Yeah solf sounds cool. I think you should have kept it in as well, respresenting the confusing love yes yes yes!

[Warren L.G De Mills]

short and cool. straight to the point . nice poem. feel free to send me requests

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A cute, sweet poem, resonates perfectly love:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

8 lines, short and sweet!
Nicely done!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a amazing writer. I wish I could write a powerful and strong poem in 28 words. In this short poem. Took the reader on a journey of emotion and love. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote