Beautiful Cathy-Ellen

I wrote this poem for my best friend who i miss dearly, because she moved away.

Beautiful ebony hair

  falling

    over 

      your

        shoulders

 

Eyes of pure sweetness,

  making the world light up

 

Gorgeous lady of forever

  smiling to make the heart flutter

 

Pure, true and gentle are you.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Ooooo!! Very nice. : ) xoxo -Mark

[Sarah Hobbit]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful description of a young girl. I like the desire to express how someone is.
"Gorgeous lady of forever
smiling to make the heart flutter"
A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Sarah Hobbit]

Thanks Coyote :-)

[Heromen Selena]

She sounds like a wonderful friend. Great poem.

[Sarah Hobbit]

Thank you