Sickness

I was sick to day

Shaky as a new born doe
I shuffle and sniffle
Shivers cover my body
Pain covers my head
My vision shifts
My nails are chipped
I cough up blood and guts 

Reviews

[Rosalind Gale]

Staight and true - no need for idleness - emotive and well versed.

Rosa -x-

[Sarah]

odd but still very good.

[Whiskurz]

The imagery works well in this piece.....Good write.....Whisk