hmmmmmmmmmmmm. it was kool. my favorite lines were She took
your heart.
And with it
mine.
She crushed
your heart.
And with it
my happiness.
but one think i didnt like was in the begining how you spaced it. another good thing was at the end that promise that she made. ;)
Thank you for mentioning that it was for the show ONCE UPON A TIME, I almost cried to god :p. The show, uh I do watch it, it is good and the poem, it can be more in a pattern and I believe with a little amendments, this can be a decent poem.
I haven't seen once upon a time, but I really liked this poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Well, if you enjoy Fairy tales I highly recommend the show. (I recommend it ether way) And thank you.. read moreWell, if you enjoy Fairy tales I highly recommend the show. (I recommend it ether way) And thank you very much!
I won't be publishing all my poems on here but I am putting them on my tumblr. Please check them out.
I'm a 16 year old girl who mostly writes poems.
I have been verbally bullied and use poetry t.. more..