Sweet Stories

Sweet Stories

A Poem by Sarah W. French
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He told me
sweet stories.
This beggar gave
me a
way to save
my son.

I took the
dagger, plunged
it deep.
His face was
the beggar
again.

The curse
took hold.
Magic and power
became my life.
My poor boy
tried to help.

Little Bae
found a way.
He made a deal
to take us
away.

But I am
a coward.
I let him
fall away
into a world
unknown.

I have lived
thousands
of lives.
And still
I search for
him.

Baelfire,
my boy, I
will find you.
Even curse
our world
to get you.

You are
the reason
I live.
And I won't
die till
I have you
back.

© 2012 Sarah W. French


Author's Note

Sarah W. French
This is a poem about Rumpelstiltskin from Once Upon A Time.

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i really like this but by the title i thought it would be sweet lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sarah W. French

12 Years Ago

thank you. And sorry, kind of, for misleading you.
Kiari Sabon

12 Years Ago

no its all good lol i thought it was kinda cool and no problem
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Dez
i love Rumpelstiltskin :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sarah W. French

12 Years Ago

...so you're a oncer too???
Good one.. I love the twist the poem provides to the original story leaving you room for the further development of the plot... good one :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I have lived
thousands
of lives.
And still
I search for
him.

It was my favorite from the whole poem though the complete poem is wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sarah W. French

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
It was like a whole sweet world being narrated. Good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


*hugs Sarah*
Simply and delicately written - a little world created -
Rosa
-xx-

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sarah W. French

12 Years Ago

thank you so much!
*hugs back*

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I won't be publishing all my poems on here but I am putting them on my tumblr. Please check them out. I'm a 16 year old girl who mostly writes poems. I have been verbally bullied and use poetry t.. more..

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