Water

I've been at the beach a lot this summer

My veins are filled
with salt water.
My hair is made
of seaweed.
My feet are covered
with sand.
The water is
my world.
It brings me peace,
happiness, and power.
I close my eyes
and feel the rhythm.
I float up and down
drowning in the water.
My mouth is filled
my nose is covered.
And still i'm at peace.
I am one with the water
and will listen to it forever.
I would give up my body,
heart and mind.
To give me another
moment in the water.

Reviews

[SaRuGi]

:) this is amazing, and i can actually realte to it.. i LOVE being in the water. :) well-written

[Trusting]

I like this poem ,keep writing. :D

[Mazie Tackett]

nice job writing this

[Leigh]

I like the way you have expressed this Poem and can relate to this a lot as I love being in the water, the feeling of being underwater and swimming, particularly in the sea.

[Rhea752]

AWESOME!!! :D love this poem!!! keep writing!!!