Words to save me

Will someone please
write something?!


something....

strong enough


strong enough
to rip the f*****g breath from your body.

Because

your ghost keeps breathing
down my neck

*I feel the strangle hold my dear*

sending toxic vapors
down my spine
seeping into
my already
fading
fading
fading


dying
dying
dying


heart.

Reviews

[Derek S.Keck]

This is outstanding, and the structural style you apply to your poetry is really bad a*s( this is the first time I've ever said bad a*s in a review). whats cool about this is that the style seems easy and casual on the surface, but like Blake you write with a deeper purpose. I liked his alot!

[The Ink Chapters]

Very emotional, love the way you structured the poem and wrote it freely yet it came together so well. Great job!

[Just Brooke]

This is so cool! Very creative and has a unique structure and captivating imagery. I loved it!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

This is superb, I can feel the despair in your words.

[JJ_love]

love the context..great shape of the poem at the end

[Hello, Goodbye]

absolutely outstanding resolute feeling here.. I love the conviction in the message and the way it captivates the reader..