Generally Confused

Generally Confused

A Poem by Sara Caitlan VanZant
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Nonsense, mostly

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Thin wisps of spider-web cling to this peg.
The last of my refusals.  
Turn and walk away, is my advice.
Ripping seams and frayed hems.
Heart-breakers with broken hearts.

We're just a joke,
The Divine Comedy, orbiting us both.

Whether it's forever, or just tonight,
I don't think you know my face.
Then or now, run or walk...
Stay frozen where you are, dripping from the heat of a summer sky.
Fingers are curled, tears turn to salt
Snow in the summer-time--Christmas in July.

Words are clinging to my throat,
but are they yours or mine?
Tell me what to do.
Give me a map, an atlas, show me the way.
Mark my path with a red pen, my destination with an '"x",
or just lead me astray.

© 2014 Sara Caitlan VanZant


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Welcome to WritersCafe. I am The Quill and it is pleasure to meet you. Now to your poetry. I enjoy this one a lot.

1) Rhyming - This poem keeps a rhyme for the third and fourth stanza.

2) The Meaning - This poem has a strong passion and a strong meaning. It is really beautiful.

Over all, this was a good poem and I really enjoyed the read. Keep up the great work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 31, 2014
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Tags: Melodrama, Poetry, Bad Form, Does this even rhyme?

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Sara Caitlan VanZant
Sara Caitlan VanZant

Ottawa, KS



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