Space

Space

 

The

 

 

space,

 

the lonely

space,

 

between me

 

and

them

 

causes my heart

 

to

ache

 

 

and bre ak.

Reviews

[Z. Smith]

Simple, powerful. I love how the "spaces" make it read just awkward enough to better convey the emotion behind this. I love poems that don't just sit there on the page. There's an art to the "way" a poem is written rather than just what it says. Very nice!

Z. Smith

[a_mystery]

space.... a gap to be filled.. expressed ur emotions in a perfect way.. loved it..

[Rory CJ Frankson]

and bre ak.

Nice space Love... Ro

[[.:SiMpLy FoRgEt Me:.]]

I like how the poem's simply put, and that how it was formed and physically put was creative. The format definately showed how much the lonely space affects (effects?) you. Keep the pencil writing. :)