Sunrise

wake up, wake up

Sunrise

 

In the early morning

the slow awakening

peeks into her

consciousness

waiting for the starting

signal of a lazy yawn

and her smile.

 

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

oh I like this simplicity, it's quite endearing.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love this... simple but i love how you wrote it for the morning, nice picture in this write.

[Wondering Mind]

A nicely penned "little" gem. Wonderful imagery.

[alesuriko]

Simple and short, yet incredibly beautiful and vivid. Wonderful imagery.

[Bee]

Good description of Sunrise.

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Wow--what a imagistic/creative short poem--I Love This One!!!

james:-)

[Gone]

Very sweet and gentle. There is nothing so wonderful as the woman's soft morning sigh. Well done.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Very expressive write short write..Good job..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

[FlawedByDesign]

So few words capture so many rays of sunshine. Beauty collected and personified in "her" and the smile that adorns her face and the world once the sunrise lights up her face.

Nicely done.

[Arthur Henn]

This short seven line canvas of warmth says it all. Very Nice!

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