Sunrise
A Poem by
Sara
wake up, wake up
Sunrise
In the early morning
the slow awakening
peeks into her
consciousness
waiting for the starting
signal of a lazy yawn
and her smile.
© 2010 Sara
Reviews
oh I like this simplicity, it's quite endearing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I love this... simple but i love how you wrote it for the morning, nice picture in this write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love this... simple but i love how you wrote it for the morning, nice picture in this write.
A nicely penned "little" gem. Wonderful imagery.
Posted 13 Years Ago
A nicely penned "little" gem. Wonderful imagery.
Simple and short, yet incredibly beautiful and vivid. Wonderful imagery.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Simple and short, yet incredibly beautiful and vivid. Wonderful imagery.
Good description of Sunrise.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Good description of Sunrise.
Wow--what a imagistic/creative short poem--I Love This One!!!
james:-)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Wow--what a imagistic/creative short poem--I Love This One!!!
james:-)
Very sweet and gentle. There is nothing so wonderful as the woman's soft morning sigh. Well done.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very sweet and gentle. There is nothing so wonderful as the woman's soft morning sigh. Well done.
Very expressive write short write..Good job..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very expressive write short write..Good job..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
So few words capture so many rays of sunshine. Beauty collected and personified in "her" and the smile that adorns her face and the world once the sunrise lights up her face.
Nicely done.
Posted 14 Years Ago
So few words capture so many rays of sunshine. Beauty collected and personified in "her" and the smile that adorns her face and the world once the sunrise lights up her face.
Nicely done.
This short seven line canvas of warmth says it all. Very Nice!
Art
Posted 14 Years Ago
This short seven line canvas of warmth says it all. Very Nice!
Art
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Added on April 30, 2010
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Sara Dallas, TX
About
Hi! I'm just a simple college student from Texas who enjoys storytelling in all its forms. I'm quite shy, so I find writing much easier than talking since I don't have to put up with my usual stutteri..
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