Tranquil Hideaway

Rubaiyat Form: is done in quatrain with a ten syllable count per line with this rhyming scheme_aaba...Interlocking Rubaiyat has this rhyming shceme:aaba, bbcb, ccac_

Tranquil hideaway, halcyon water

A peaceful place for adopted daughter

His special child who loves the glistening

On flower petals; thank you my accepter

 

Mountain trail, Spirit accompanying

Pasotal scene my Father listening

His loving hands are so very gentle

Words so loving come none are abashing

 

Being at this place not accidental

Total faith in Him_no abandoning

Thanks for harmonious soothing corner

Gentle hands, voice, His Spirit abiding

Author's Note

This is not my photo graph...I borrowed it from the internet..It was used in a competition to give the contestants something to work from..The form was the Rubaiyat..

Reviews

[Lourisa]

A beautiful scene you are sketching. You have something I have not and may it always be dear to you!

[An owl on the moon]

How you create a freedom of grace and peace within this wondrous form! Yes, the Father leads us beside such quiet waters and lifts the burdens of our day.

[Tina Kline]

A beautiful vision of a paradise on many levels. One of nature and one of the spirit! This is a most wonderful write!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A very beautiful and inspiring poem. Its speaks to me of faith and trust in Him. Very powerful words in this very lovely poem.