Ungenerous Heart

Short rhyme

Your ungenerous heart forbear

Can not understand why

From me a generous reply

 

As from my easy chair

Face storms of life; must then welter

Need warm heart to shelter

 

Don't understand in life your part

Sometimes wish for release

From stingy ungenerous heart

And go to grave in peace

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Very heartfelt poem, the needing of a safe place, a peaceful place from life's storms.

[An owl on the moon]

Always so good to see a new one from you, my friend. Your contrasts here, of storms and shelter, take us deeply inside a heart of pain.. an honest searching for release and deepest peace. Powerful, poignant words..

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Pain,confusion and loneliness and just the powerful need for peace. Peace from others and peace from the turmoil and pain within one's self. I'm thinking that's what this poem is about.

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