Deliberately

Free verse, short

Deliberately she goes to the rasberries

Quietly, softly moves the foot of the lady

Who enjoys the early morn to explore the outdoors

Seeing what if anything has changed overnight

 

Elegant even adorned in loose gown

With silver flip-flops on those plump feet

Oh! yes some rasberries are ready to be picked

Grasp, rinse, eat just the food needed for now

Author's Note

Took a picture just on a whim then wrote this one..

Reviews

[Hellslastwarrior]

Oh! yes some rasberries are ready to be picked

Grasp, rinse, eat just the food needed for now
Haha you sound like you've been picking raspberries. Nice descriptions keep it up.
Ted

[Robin]

i like poetic snapshots , anticipation of a new day , the reminder of simplicity , happiness in "just enough"

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

I can see it all happening....great imagery

vincent

[thedaydreamer]

"Seeing what if anything has changed overnight"

This piece of work is Elegant... and lively, I must say. However, it does seem a little juvenile to me.

And aren't they "raspberries" ?

[James Paulin]

Superbly delicate and feminine. I can sense the dew in the air.