Gathering Rasberries

Short, styled after George Herbert(Anglo Welsh). 8,6,8,6,7,7,7,7, syllables per line..Rhyme scheme...a,b,a,b,c,c,c,c,

As I gather the rasberries

     Thinking only of you

With Dove's coo to entertain me

     As he sings his love, too

 

I will have to wash in water

Damaged ones will have to curr

Like God takes the damaged sir

Transforms into another

 

Author's Note

Influened after reading George Herbert(Anglo Welsh)...Easy to write...Picture taken in early morn when there was heavy humidity and the lens of the camera was foggy..I liked the look..

Reviews

[Hellslastwarrior]

Enjoyed the sense of feeling i got when read this poem good job sunflower. Hey you written any stories?

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

As I gather the rasberries

Thinking only of you..that first line did it for me,i wish you would have built on this poem more but sometimes it is best to keep it short.

[Snapdragon]

This is really pretty. I like the rhyme scheme in it. Nice job.

[just rose.]

I did a paper on George Herbert long, long ago ... I like these classical inspirations!