Honeymoon Getaway

Ten lines, five syllables each line ....About a picture

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                              From room with prospect

                               Each one could see all

                              Through archway vista

                              All that clear blue sky

                               Quickly run_ocean

                               Promising sun_fun

                              A day at the beach

                            Warm sun, suntan oil

                             Cool water soft surf

...                        Isle of Ancient Greece 

Author's Note

In response to a picture of an alley or ancient ruins with an archway with only blue sky being seen...

Reviews

[just rose.]

the visuals are great and you suggest the intimacy beautifully here.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

I too use pictures to inspire my writing. You did well here. Thanks for sharing.

[r]

coolio i can see the pic!

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

Nicely done. Gave me a lovely vision as I read along.

~True

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Those old places of beauty make us come alive and want to see everything. I like the description and story. You have great talent. A complete beautiful poem in so few words.
Coyote

[Ruth]

Wonderful! xx