Under The Rose Trellis

Under The Rose Trellis

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Choka, the longest of Japanese Haiku type poem...

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                             Running Pale Pink Rose

                       On the trellis grows_soft scent

                             Wafts on morning air

                   

                               Under rose trellis

                       You steal a kiss__Oh! Blissful

                            Lips that taste of rose

 

© 2011 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


Author's Note

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Choka, written in response to competition that said leave me breathless..

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There is something special about a rose, a kiss, and a poem...
They are all rather "minuscule" in the grand scheme of things. Yet, they all have the power to change this world into a better place...
Much like you Sara as an author... Making the world a better place.
Lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Yes it did leave one breathless. Loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful visions of roses and love! Yes in deed breath taking!

Posted 13 Years Ago


whoa, this is beautiful. This piece is short but the stories I can imagine from this piece are endless. It leaves me in a sort of blissful mood. Great write:) Im adding this

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice work, I like this and the photograph makes the impact all the greater.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is breathtakingly beautiful poetry at its best. I love it! You write so graciously with softly tuned words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


So short and sweet! To steal a kiss, loved the analogy!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is beautiful and breathtaking all in one. I can smell the rose as I read, the imagery made it real. I love reading Haiku poems!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A stunner! Very nicely done. Simple, elegant, and sweet as a rose.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 12, 2010
Last Updated on April 19, 2011
Tags: Choka, love, nature, take your breath away
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