Under The Rose Trellis

Choka, the longest of Japanese Haiku type poem...

                             Running Pale Pink Rose

                       On the trellis grows_soft scent

                             Wafts on morning air

                   

                               Under rose trellis

                       You steal a kiss__Oh! Blissful

                            Lips that taste of rose

 

Author's Note

Choka, written in response to competition that said leave me breathless..

Reviews

[David Scott]

There is something special about a rose, a kiss, and a poem...
They are all rather "minuscule" in the grand scheme of things. Yet, they all have the power to change this world into a better place...
Much like you Sara as an author... Making the world a better place.
Lovely!

[Pax]

simplicity is beauty. lovely poem.

[Ruth]

This is gorgeous! All hits the point in soft mannerism, wow! xoxo

[MOON]

Beautifully told and presented , visual writing.

[Leslie Philibert]

Good, well- written poem that arouses my interest in this kind of poem.Good work

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Thanks for your kind review...Sara

[WindSong]

This is a breathtaking piece of poetry to inhale and savor forever. It's just a magnificent and beautiful poem one could cherish forever!

WindSong

[Chris Taylor]

I well crafted poem that sends its subtle message light an exhale in the wind. A very good poem. Nice work.

[nishalization]

Smelt the fragrance of the rose.. Really spontaneous. Good luck

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Amazing Haiku!
Real nice descriptions.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This piece is truly Breathless.... :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a wonderfully romantic piece.