Love Waits Near The Peach Orchard

Love Waits Near The Peach Orchard

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Jueju but written for a contest which required 4 stanzas not just one stanza like it is supposed to be written.

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She sits near the peach orchard
Waits to take love's calloused hand
Autumn's leaves are nearly gone
Winter's cold wind on life lands

Whispers in soft twilight glow
As snow on the mountains fall
Memories like rivers pass
As future's vision does stall

The seasons have had hard blows
Mixed in blessings from above
Memories comfort you so
While hand and hand, we still love

Silver strands in moonlight shines
Love now a great fulfilled dream
Through some storms and gentle snow
Love's true strength will always gleam

© 2024 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


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no matter what nature and the cosmos do, it seems your love will weather them all…..tho the seasons give their knock, it seems the relationship can internalize it quite well….a lovely piece with some struggles, in the end everything will be fine because strength shrouds them in deep hope…
warmly, B

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

1 Week Ago

Thank you, Betty, for the understanding review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here reading .. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Week Ago

You’re very welcome Sara🌷
Warmly
B



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This poem shows a romantic relationship, intertwined with the imagery of seasons, nature, and the passage of time, illustrating how love persists and evolves through various life stages.

Beautiful word choice used like "calloused," "whispers," "twilight," "silver strands," and "fulfilled dream" suggest both the wear and beauty of love over time. The diction is reflective and tender, emphasizing the emotional depth of the relationship.

Very magnificent write, I enjoyed this one .
-Amy

Posted 5 Days Ago


no matter what nature and the cosmos do, it seems your love will weather them all…..tho the seasons give their knock, it seems the relationship can internalize it quite well….a lovely piece with some struggles, in the end everything will be fine because strength shrouds them in deep hope…
warmly, B

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

1 Week Ago

Thank you, Betty, for the understanding review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here reading .. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Week Ago

You’re very welcome Sara🌷
Warmly
B
wow, this is intense....the imagery storms the page...love if it is true can withstand all the seasons.
It may have a calloused hand but it can reach out and grasp hard and fast.
j.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Jacob, for the visit and leaving such a nice review of my work. I appreciate the time spe.. read more
Well I like the first stanza it reminded me when I work in the orchards mother nature I pick her trees rake her leaves endure the cold to reap her warmth come next spring. Love how all 5 come together, Thank you for sharing.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Mauricio, I appreciate the nice review of my work. Yes, an orchard can give a person so m.. read more

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Added on October 2, 2024
Last Updated on October 3, 2024
Tags: love, life