Foggy Veil

Poulter's Measure Rhyme

As the foggy veil drifts 'pon the vale

The moisture layer stays

Creating acoustics so fine

On the symphony plays

 

"I have a Father who knows my name"

He understand my needs

The longings of my human heart

In the morn's quiet He feeds

 

"And He hears me when I call"

My desires comprehends

And draws me to marvel at nature

Its beauty has no end

 

He sends dewdrops' moisture daily

'Pon roses it descends

All my desires He understands

Each one He comprehends

 

"He knows my name, its written there"

Soon He will call me home

Human to spirit I'll transcend

I'll be at peace~shalom

 

The sun has cast purple this morn

Now a deep gold it brings

Soon it will heat the good earth

Creating fall's wellspring

 

 

Author's Note

Out on the porch...Sara

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

The Last of Mohicans theme on Jenny's Violin ( Live ) Talk to "Freida"( she adds sound all the time, I don't know how) add that sound to this , listen once as you think of the Appalachians, see if your father smiles.

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful scene melting into the most profound expression of love and security. Lifting and wondrous, Sara!

[David Scott]

The first line is a poem all its own...
I felt a child loving her "Father"...
We all need to learn this trust in the "Foggy Veil" of life.
Both youthful in hope and trust, yet wise and soul filled.

[Ruth]

This is layered with such beauty...shimmers actually, I find peace in this and some solace...beautiful! xx

[SyberRose]

Beautifully penned...nice flow and lovely theme...:)