What used to be

What happened to the laughter?
What happened to the joy, we used to hold?
What happened to the fun, we used to stand for?
We were supposed to be in love, nothing was gonna come between.
You made the choice to do it,
it's to late now. You can't turn back!
What were you thinking hun?
Did you really think I would forgive?
You made this choice, so whats the point?
I don't want your excuses anymore and baby sorry only goes so far.
Sorry but this is not my style so please just leave,
Don't call me when its hit you, don't tell me that you will change
You did it and its over that is all that matters.
Your anger should never get so far, that I know for sure
Honey my momma didn't raise a fool.
I saw the signs and now were done, it's not that I don't love you;
but you choose to do the wrong, you knew it would cost us.

Author's Note

This was just a poem that was nagging me after a visit from the crisis center at college. I got an amazing idea for a book off it though :)

Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

Eh some grammatical errors. There was passion but I don't know about the flow (it's a problem I have as well so no worries). Other than that I'm sure a few people can relate to this, I can't, however. -Ian

[Junert]

It's great and a reality.

[Alex Crow]

Yeah, you could put this inside a book, a boyfriend cheating on a girlfriend section. Good job, I felt it, deep man very deep.

[These Haunted Hallways]

Wow, this was really awesome!! :) I can totally relate to this situation. For me, it's horrible when somebody ya love and care about so much just disappears off and does something that you'd never think in a trillion years they'd ever do. I felt it, i felt it a lot. Really great job with this!! :)

[koty bell]

daaaaaaaaaaaaaam good write that was really awesome reminded me of taylor swifts shoulda said no a little bit