I've done it again

My tears fall like rain
The pain just wont go away
The hurt is clear on my face
I cant talk straight
My eyes are blurred
And feelings torn
My world is gone
The peices ill have to fix
I cant go on but i have to live
I feel so numb
This just cant be done
My emotions are strung
I have gone and the blood is here

I've done it again

I'm Sorry

Reviews

[Junert]

Aww

[Michael X]

when pain is so unbearable, the only escape is more pain, the ironside
to a new beginning can sometimes be just as destroying as the
initial cause, hence, when suffering brings a sense of release,
you express the meaning with perfect clarity and simplicity,
talented job, keep up the great work :)

[koty bell]

emotion to the fullest very sad but loved it very much:)

[Zombri]

So strong... I almost teared up while reading this.

[Alex Crow]

This is very emotional and it has a great meaning. Is this reffering to trusting?

[closed..acct]

This is wonderful, powerful and emotional
well expressed...

[wes pierce]

very sad poem but has a good meaning to it

[Reaper]

very depressing and sad. and you express those emotions well throughout this. Every line just is really strong.

[Marie]

A very depressing poem--thw writer's world again torn apart.