Pain

My hearts in peices
My lifes on the line
My sanity is sliping
I'm starting to lie
I've lost my smile
I've lost my glow
I've lost the joy
I used to hold
My smiles faded

My eyes are dull
My hands are shaking
My chest is aching
My only reason
For holding on is
You!
Even though the pain is
there and my hearts in peices
I love you with all the peices
Till the day i die!

Reviews

[Who Cares]

I like the concept and it was pretty unique

[Alex Crow]

Beautiful

[Kaylor Mason]

This is a true expression of love in its purest form; I hope we all have someone tell us this, at least once, in our lives: living without it would be too cruel

[Reaper]

strong emotions shown here. well done.