Au'revoir

Girl seeing her love leaving her. Leaving her heartbroken and sad. She wants him to come back, but hopes turn upside down. Will he come soon?

"Au'revoir"

 by: E.D<3

 

 

 

Au'revoir mon amour.

We will see ourselves in a couple of years.

This will not last forever,

But our love does.

 

Nothing compares to the sadness I'm feeling right now.

Let this be our last goodbye, because I don't want to see you cry.

We've been through a lot and amour, I love you.

 

Will I see you soon?

Will this be our last kiss?

Will you write to me over night?

Please don't go away, I need you more than ever in my heart.

 

No more of this amour.

I've been hurt and don't wish to go through hell anymore.

Will the promises you made still be kept?

 

Now I see you walking away.

My heart is tearing to pieces.

This is not what I wanted.

 

I never wanted to see you walk away.

To see you leaving me alone in the pouring rain.

 

Come back.

Please do soon.

Because...because...

Je t'aime.

 

 

Au'revoir mon amour...

 

 

 

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E.D.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

So, this is my first work published here :)
Hope you like it and tell me what you think!
More to come soon :) Not only poems but stories, lyrics etc.

elizabeth*

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Such a romantic poem Elizabeth. How descriptive your emotions are in this piece. I could almost hear your heart breaking all the way through. So beautiful.

[619girl]

I really like it! I like the use of french words here. it also has very strong emotion of sadness. great write and i enjoyed reading this! :)

[Robyn]

lovely. expressive.
very powerful!
i look forward to reading more of what you have written!
:)

[Elizabeth]

MiidniightSoul: Thank you very much :)

[MiidniightSoul]

This was awesome. Very powerful ^^

[The Uncommon Muse]

I picked up on the emotions meant to be conveyed in this piece, but I think with some continued work it could be even more powerful...but great start.

[Nicole Alicia]

i like this! I can relate to it.

[Elizabeth]

Julie: Yes :)
Julie: Here you go...
Au'revoir= Goodbye
Amour= Love
Je t'aime= I love you
Au'revoir mon amour= Goodbye my love

:) hope it helped

oh! and thank you! :D

[Julie]

amour means love right?

[Julie]

this is really good! but what does the title mean? Im a little confuzed on that part