I remember..

you pulled me in

and held me close

tears started falling from my eyes

as i remember the time we said goodbye

 

that night i remember so well

you looked into my eyes and said

baby we let go once but now your mine

you kissed my lips and said i will never let go

 

but things got more heated

as i felt your breath on my neck

you slowly kissed up until you reached my lips

i put my arms around you as we fell to the ground

 

you looked into my eyes and said i love you

and i couldnt help but say i love you too

i always have and i always will

you looked at me and smiled.

 

your dad said it was time for me to leave

but before i walked away you pulled me close

held me one last time and kissed me

and said come back tomorrow

 

i left out of breath

because you took it away

with that one last kiss

i walked away that night smiling

 

but the next day i tried to call

but you said no im done with you

i've had enough i cant do it anymore

and then you hung up as tears fell from my eyes

 

it was three months until we saw each other again

and you held me close and said i miss you

tears fell from my eyes as i remembered our goodbye

you pulled away as i faked a smile and walked away

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[C.J.]

i cant think of wat to say it was a very good poem and i hope your work is all like this its very good.