To You

what a f*****g d****e i wanna kill him with something sharp :)

All our memories

spilled all over the floor

with tears falling down my face

baby you could never be replaced

 

remember the day we met

and you looked into my eyes

and said baby i know you've been hurt

but never again will you hear another lie.

 

remember when you told me

" i will never let you fall

i'll stand up with you forever

i will be there through it all

even if saving you sends me to heaven?"

 

but look at me

i've fallen to the ground

and i can no longer stand

your not here anymore

and you dont even care..

 

i sit on my floor

with that box of memories

with the sweater you gave me

and everything else.

 

i keep telling myself

im over you.

who am i trying to fool

i could never get over you

no matter what you do

 

 

not a million fights

a thousand tears

a hunder lies

10 unsaid words

1 breath

could make me hate you </3

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Samith Pich]

haha great! this is earnest with minimum cliche, i like the inclusion of the sweater, gave something concrete, could use a colour tho?? sounds like a few poems i've done! perhaps because so much of human experience is shared and thats why we can appreciate it...

thanks for sharing!