What If

it's to three people they know who they aree.

what if i were to tell you

i was ready to end it all

if i couldnt take life no more

because no one could see past this wall

 

what if i were to tell you i was done

had enough of your bullshit

and having you tell me i was the one

and your the one to blame for all of this

 

what if i were to tell you

i needed you all along

and that without you im nothing

and i am all alone?

 

What if i were to tell you

that you were never there

you never understood a word i felt

or actually cared.

 

What if i were to tell you

i was what you expected

another fucked up daughter

who always disappointed her father

 

What if i were to tell you

i wanted to end it all

because i couldnt get over the hurt

all  of you have you caused.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[I love you; just not to..]

What if. nothing.
you wont ever fall cause i'll catch you.
and i'll be there when another little f****r breaks you cause this time i'll be able to break his neck :)
you neverr have to feel like your ntohing cause your everything to me. and you'll never have to be alone cause im alway right here no matter what.. iam. no matter how many time you get lost, no matter how many times you push me away, I'll come back.
and your mom a w***e anyways and with your dad he love you, and you might disappiont him sometimes but you alway come out and prove something.
and you know what fagggot suck a*s, and one day he'll need you and you wont need him :)

[Kenny K]

awww Alii:( it's ok i' here for you now:) we will be ok:P

[I love you; just not to..]

Well hmm, I read this poem. Its good.
But did you ever maybe think, that who ever these three people are, probably didn't mean to make you feel like this or would never want you to be hurting like you are. Maybe they were doing there best to help but then got lost in the way of their own feelings, I don't know. But I know that they wouldn't want you to want to end it all.
Maybe you need to talk to them, explain to them better, maybe your not making it clear enough, obviously when they read this going to know they're doing something wrong, but how they suppost to know,what it is, if you don't help out as well, because then it's just going to end like this again and again and again. I say talk to them because obviously they're doing something wrong ?