the light

the light

A Poem by Sapphire.Diamond

im searching for that light

to lead me the right way

to lead me to that path

to help me forget my mistakes

 

im searching and searching

the light is no where to be found

im standing here in dark

trying to find that path

 

i can not see where i am headed

and no one is here to help

i was left behind

 

im searching for that light

to lead me the right way

to lead me to that path

to help forget yesterday.

 

 

© 2008 Sapphire.Diamond


Author's Note

Sapphire.Diamond
i just had a whole bunch of thoughts
i know it doesn't make sense..
oh well.

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I love this. Good job.

and no one is here to help
i was left behind

your never alone, honstly no one ever is, your only alone when you cant see who trying to help you.
and there alway someone even if it feels like there no one there. there is!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I actually like this. We all need to find our light. Very relatable. Love it!
Keep up the good work! :D

Posted 16 Years Ago


Here's a poem to witch I'm sure many of us can relate to.
Your wish to find the supreme revelation and leave the past behind, is penned in a very artistic way that is wonderful and communicates emotions clearly.
I didn't like the fact that you used different colors, it gives the poem a ,,cheap,, appearance.

A.M.


Posted 16 Years Ago



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I�m always a mess, I can never keep my own secrets. I laugh way to hard at stupid things, my favorite songs can make me cry, I always watch for 11:11, but I miss it more then I notice it, .. more..

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