Shoot.

Shoot.

A Poem by Sapph

Romance is a memory and the photo is empathetic.
She is distant.
The photo is charismatic as you are nostalgic.
Stricken, beautiful.
Crinkled eyes make for a timeless romance.
The photo is melancholic as you are happy.
Unfair.
As the photo is lost my heart chants;
Never me.
Never me.
Never me.
The romance is lust as the photo fades.
The photo is overlooked.
She is lust as you are ignorant.

© 2016 Sapph


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I think I would like to have more details about the actual picture itself, but perhaps you kept it vague for the reader to focus more on the viewer's emotions.

I like the repetition of "never me."

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like the progression in thought with this.

The photo is
1. empathetic/charismatic
2. melancholic
3.lost
And finally overlooked.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, awesome poetry...your words flowed your vision. Wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Sapph
Sapph

Norwich, Norfolk, United Kingdom



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