The Guy who led me out

Walking alone in the dark,

It is the deadly remark.

Going deep deep inside,

Hiding from the brightening light.

Suddenly lightening struck into the sky,

which left a fear in my eye.

Crossing all the barriers around,

Running like a warrior sound.

Then I saw a shinning star,

The time of glee I thought.

But it's not easy to sought,

There are problems all around.

Suddenly someone came by,

Held my hand and made me smile.

He was a guy, who helped people search for light.

We found the way outside, it was full of lights,

Then he left me alone,

Without a sigh he went back inside.

Reviews

[Lilia]

I love the dark theme, and the rhyming added is wonderful! Well done!

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Thank u so much..

[A little flame]

Fantastic imagery. A bit confusing but, impact full, just the same. Loved it!

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Thank u so much