Bloody Love

Bloody Love

A Poem by InsomniacWriter

If covering me in
black and blue
was a way of saying
'I love you'
then you don't you just
butcher me to
become all yours?

If calling me 'fake'
was some kind of training to
face my
fears,
then why don't
you throw me off
 a bridge
to make me become
the most courageous
human alive?

If only you were me,
If only you could read
this,
but it'll only expand
your techniques
to burn my
innocence.

© 2013 InsomniacWriter


Author's Note

InsomniacWriter
For those who once had abusive boyfriends/husbands/bestfriends etc in the past but now you're been freed from that cage. I hope you feel me.

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This is interesting, it certainly has some emotion to it, but its a subdued emotion. Theres anger and sorrow here, but it needs to be stronger. Otherwise, its amazing, i like the way you describe this:(

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 14, 2013
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Manchester, Lancashire , United Kingdom



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