Our shoes on their feet!

 

With a pair of binoculars,

Flapping those wings, saw I

A robin sighting me…

Arraigned I was

To trespassed their trail…

I wonder sometime

Am I, studying them

Or are they tracking me?

Once,

I fitted the collars around their necks

Voila!

And they got the “beeps” of my movement

Immobilon!

Straight from my tranquilizer gun…

There went the darts

And trust me…

In place of them

I dozed off whole the day

In the captivity of this life

I am an untamed captive!

They appear decent

Whilst,

With these out-grown- nails and shaggy look

I seem wild

Alas!

In this wild world-

The coin, now, is flipped

We shared those meatballs

At their costs…

Let their fangs pierce

Our skins…

I howl the soreness

Mockingly,

They gossips…

“Let us wear your shoes!”

 

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel “Hridayaninadini”

28^th May, 2012; 11:53am... CES- new lab-new scenario-

A thought of wildlife conservation- Human-hence tracked!

Author's Note

Let me crack some- fun !
We all are under this sun...
I saw the deer- a death run
I forgot-
I was the one with a gun...!!!

Reviews

[Dayran]

An affirmation of our humanity, certainly was very much our life with the animals a long time ago, but we grow more complex....and the human mind is the highest evolved nature today. Does it continue to care? I think it does...with or without a subscription to National Geographic.

[TheSweet]

This is a great piece. Very refeshing to see something a little more abberant and, in fact, something quirky for a change. :) Still, you make a good point, tis a wild world indeed. Thanks!

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Lovely. as always..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

"In the captivity of this life
I am an untamed captive!"
The animals may seem untamed. They are organized and survive a long time before man hunger to cut down the forest, destroy the rain forest and quickly kill the beast. I believe after the last animal is gone. Man will follow. We are one upon the earth. Thank you for the thoughts provoking poetry.
Coyote

[Rene Velez]

nice play with words, adventurous and compelling.

[Lily Mae]

We can learn alot about life if we place our feet into all living things.. I loved reading this..xo

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A spiral of words, leave the reader breathless, well done, good read.

[MOON]

Lovely write unique perspective.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrific write..love how it's done...tables turned etc
great :D

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

i love the way you think, placing yourself in the shoes of animals and birds. I think deeply and have sat and pondered and even wrote about the thoughts of a bee.......Awesome piece.