Miracle!

For I wish-miracle to happen...

Miracle

 

Amongst this huge noise,

When I mutely behold 

That-

Last leaf -withering away

Taciturn- I stand!

The eyes hence rolls around

To catch the glimpse of

The last voyage of the roving clouds…

That river where meanders

The last hope!

Round the bend,

I may sound, my folks!

For I fancy that

those dying flowers

must blossom…

For it must see

What it means to me!

If only the prayers would

have worked !

I could see the shining Sun

amidst the nights!

And the thorns of cactus

Could never pierce my heart!

This gust of air brings in 

The hope!

That the rain shall drench my land

That the wind will blow off the sand…

That the mighty heaven will speak-

A word!

Blind-folded, I am

For I trust merely- in

 “Miracle”

 

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel “Hridayaninadini”

19^th May, 2012

Nesara-IISc-3:30pm

I pray for you... 

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Author's Note

Sometime- Poems are not just a way to express your feelings- but also your tears which disappears in this mighty space- without being noticed...I want and pray miracles to happen in my life- for I have no option lefts...I sound selfish !

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Blind-folded, I am
For I trust merely- in
“Miracle”
Some miracle can happen and we are too blind to see them. I like the desire and hope in this poem. we must hold on to hope and dreams. miracles can happen if the heart and mind gather many with the same. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jibey]

A miracle in the desert drought.. I hope it will happen to such a good writer

[Amila Jay]

Maybe a miracle might come true one day ... all you need is to believe .. It's a great poem :))

[TheSweet]

There's no need to appologise for sounding selfish. Poetry is designed for personal things - in the hope that others understand. People only do understand if you write it well. And this poem, I do very much understand...

Therefore. Great poem :) Thanks for sharing!

[nevermindfan1991]

This was a great poem. One line irked me though "And the thorns of cactus
Could never pierce my heart!" sounded very cliche.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

:)

[Lily Mae]

There nothing selfish in wanting those things that we know or believe will make us whole.. like a puzzle pieces are coming to us in small bits at times and we know and can see the puzzle finished ..and that makes us struggle and want.. Be patient with you and and your needs.. breathe in the love that surrounds you and hold it in your heart as you manifest your dreams right in front of you..xo

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching piece that lends to drea land, well done, good read.

[MOON]

lovely write , life is the miracle.

[Ramya]

This is deep! Good writing....nice thought flow.