Man-not-a-machine!

My heart beeps

And my blood conducts

the current of emotions

And

My brain declares

“Turning the world-

Into the Machines!”

 

 “The Sun got jammed

The Moon went low

The birds that flew

Sans the charge!

plunged into the deep unknown…”

Whispered my Robot-

In this hearing device !

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

CES-IISc-16-March-2012-4:00pm

"Hey,I am a "man-not-a-machine!!!"

 

 

Photocredits:

 http://acreativeuniverse.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/matt_dixon-12.jpg

http://acreativeuniverse.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/10/illustration-kazak-robot-painting.jpg

Reviews

[Lowesy]

hmm... nice short little piece, would be great if you could go into it a bit more, expand a bit upon how it relates to you a bit more. Good though

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It is a great blend of art and tech, well done, good read.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great insight...
excellent :)

[Dayran]

As the world becomes more tech, man works harder to humanize the experience, otherwise we'll still be riding bullock carts. Nice write!

[Jibey]

Lively expression of the central idea...

[Coyote Poetry]

Most of us feel like robots lately. Easy to forget to be human. I like the pictures. Gave life to the excellent poem.
Coyote