Man-not-a-machine!

My heart beeps

And my blood conducts

the current of emotions

And

My brain declares

“Turning the world-

Into the Machines!”

 

 “The Sun got jammed

The Moon went low

The birds that flew

Sans the charge!

plunged into the deep unknown…”

Whispered my Robot-

In this hearing device !

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

CES-IISc-16-March-2012-4:00pm

"Hey,I am a "man-not-a-machine!!!"

 

 

Photocredits:

 http://acreativeuniverse.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/matt_dixon-12.jpg

http://acreativeuniverse.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/10/illustration-kazak-robot-painting.jpg

Reviews

[Suditi]

Its an amazing poem.
I love the comparison..and the message has been forward in a subtle yet powerful way.
Great write.

[Katannaism]

A very unique poem! I like how you managed to give the robot 'emotions'. Very well expressed~

[Lively]

A poem which can be easily related to oneself!

[TheSweet]

I like this, it reminds me of a story about robots I had a child (which, as far as liking something goes, is cheating, of course), but I can't for the life of me think of what it was called. Still, thanks a bunch for sharing :)

[R J Askew]

I like this. I feel sorry for the robot. But the robot cannot feel the same for us. But the robot may one day replace us, with all our inconvenient and capricious emotions. The pic is great.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Wonderful write!

[freelancejouster]

the images and conciseness within the poem are so great that the actual pictures detract some, i think.

[Mary C]

An evocative poem- - a wonderful write .

[Kenneth The Poet]

This doesn't suffer from an iron deficiency at all.

[The old me]

awesome poem. added with the pictures, it just wraps up into a great poem.