An Abyss

When I am with you-

You complete me

I am a part of you

You are the World!

                           

But sometimes

I fear 

Confusion

That creates an abyss

Between you and me

Even a little distance, I abhor!

And this happened,

A chasm went fathomless

You went away,

For no reason!

I got many hands to rob these tears,

But

None of them

Was Yours!

Still I am delving…

 Now,

I remembered

How you helped me

In crossing

All the hurdles…

6

But,

I am full of tears

You flew away

With the flock

Lies in me, a mere hope!

How shall I,

Say you

Where I am!

        Completely         

Lonely

In this throng of strangers

Anticipating…

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

IISc-India-4:01pm-6th March-20"12"

A trial- Photography-cum-Poetry

Photoes:© 2012 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel

Reviews

[Rene Velez]

Sheer beauty...

[Brad]

such a beautiful exchange with nature and mankind...how lost we'd be without one another

[freelancejouster]

i really like the flow of this, especially the ending!

in the second stanza, i think you mean "sometimes" instead of "sometime"

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

The last word one like the final stitch on a finely tailored suit.
A complete emotional description here, taking this reader into reflection and remembrance.
A complete and very well done piece of writing...the pics were a visual bonus!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A fierce amount of work went into this, clear ad easy to read, well done, good job.

[Dayran]

A great combination of the logos aspect of our expression with the verbal expression and meaning. Its reference to winged creatures may be accurate but somebody forgot to tell that to the female of the species. Nice write!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photos. Gave strength to the story. You create a situation with a sad ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jibey]

Good use of the images to make the point of the sadness of the parting...

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Tried the combination between poetry and photography...A personified passion!